Monday, January 7,13
My Dream Job
When I was a little boy I had this dream, it was to be a doctor.
I started thinking about this job when I was four years old, and right now I still have that dream. I want to be a doctor because this job is a good thing to do in life. This work helps poeple that need help with their lifes. If I ever get to be a doctor I'll help those people that are poor and can't afored to pay. I'll some times give them free exams to those poor people. When I graduate from highschool I'll go to college and learn alot of medicine and how to learn react when a patient is almost dying.
Good job Alexis! You only have a few errors listed below. This is a great dream! I love that you are so motivated for such a difficult job! Math and Science will be your main classes :) Have a great weekend!
ReplyDeleteLife (singular) = lives (plural)
afford to pay
sometimes is one word
and learn ho to react